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Posted on 03-30-06 7:51 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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my sweetheart = lfc123. Please compare and contrast! :) :)

The Chimney Sweeper (Songs of Innocence), 1789

When my mother died I was very young,
And my father sold me while yet my tongue
Could scarcely cry " 'weep! 'weep! 'weep! 'weep!"
So your chimneys I sweep & in soot I sleep.

There's little Tom Dacre, who cried when his head,
That curl'd llke a lamb's back. was shav'd: so I said
"Hush. Tom! never mind it, for when your head's bare
You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair."

And so he was quiet & that very night,
As Tom was a-sleeping, he had such a sight!
That thousands of sweepers, Dick, Joe, Ned or Jack.
Were all of them lock'd up in coffins of black.

And by came an Angel who had a bright key,
And he open'd the coffins & set them all free;
Then down a green plain leaping, laughing, they run,
And wash in a river. and shine in the Sun.

Then naked & white, all their bags left behind,
They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind;
And the Angel told Tom, if he'd be a good boy,
He'd have God for his father & never want joy.

And so Tom awoke; and we rose in the dark.
And got with our bags & our brushes to work.
Tho' the morning was cold, Tom was happy & warm;
So if all do their duty they need not fear harm.





The Chimney Sweeper (Songs of Experience), 1794

A little black thing among the snow:
Crying weep, weep, in notes of woe!
Where are thy father & mother! say!
They are both gone up to the church to pray.

Because I was happy upon the heath,
And smil'd among the winters snow:
They clothed me in the clothes of death,
And taught me to sing the notes of woe.

And because I am happy, & dance & sing,
They think they have done me no injury:
And are gone to praise God & his Priest & King
Who make up a heaven of our misery.


PS: if you don't wanna help that's also okay! :) :)
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:00 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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LOLLLLLL! NO YOU DIDNT! THATS SUCH AN INSULT IN A WAY IF IT IS WHAT I THINK!
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:18 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nails,
can you give me some time? i need to read the poem a bunch of times before i understand what the peot is trying to say.

azwnty,
quoi??? tu parle avec moi in that thread? doens't make sense!
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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NON, j'êtrai stupidée, nvm umm.. mon copaine :) hehe
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:26 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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tu es probablement ivre. hahahaha.
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:26 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ICF help your younger sister with her homework. Good for you!!! Bharkhar 9:30 ta bho ni.
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:29 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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HAHAHAHA!!not drunk, tipsy re kya! ;) afu ke gerdai?
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:33 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nothing much. i am trying to decipher those poems k. i added u in msn ko adres ma. i dont' think u use that very often.
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:39 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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o o o o, LOOOL okay i will add you up on mine, i use a different one thats why but right now im doin my project ke!! it sucks. im so overwhelmed cuz theres so much to do and havent even started doin the good copy yet.. :( plch plch! look likes you got one heck of a work to do ;) im talking about the poem analyze... we know you're good at it though :)
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:55 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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this is kinda hard. never read these poems before. i dn't think i can get into as detaileed as the other one.
in the firs poem, there are two chidlren haina, and they are supposed to sweep. i think they are slaves becasue the kid tells that he was sold by his father. and the little kid, tom, is scared. so the other kid is trying to console him by saying that if they faithfully do thier job, they will go to heaven and this thought makes them happy. the first poem is expressing some hope that god will free them eventaully from this stage of slavery said in the stanza. "And by came an Angel who had a bright key,
And he open'd the coffins & set them all free;
Then down a green plain leaping, laughing, they run,
And wash in a river. and shine in the Sun" --> this dream is their state of utopia k and they are only hoping for this. they are hoping an angel will come and release them. so for now, they should stick to doing thier jobs and if they do it fairly, nothing can harm them. i however dont know if this is a straightforward message or if the poet is trying to say that these kids will never expereince utopia and they will alwasy be stuck in this cycle.


in the second poem, the little kid is pushed to this state of unhappiness because of his own parents. its a critisim of teh church and what it imposes on the soceity. the kid used to be happy before ,tara his parents "They clothed me in the clothes of death,
And taught me to sing the notes of woe",because they felt that to go to heaven, he must be miserable. (i think hai) which just means made him miserable and he is happy no more. the child realizes that the church only takes thier happiness away from them. the kid in the second poem is very critical of hsi parents and soceity. he is beliying his misery and sadness with his happiness and songs and dances, but his parents fail to see that. the kid also says that the church makes teh society suffer in this life by giving them a hope of heaven after their death " And are gone to praise God & his Priest & King
Who make up a heaven of our misery". either that means the church benefits from teh misery it gives to people ("make up heaven) or it makes people miserable justifying that there is a heaven after death.....
(how the church makes them suffer or why the kid is sad i don't know...may be its because the church tells him he has sinned or something)

THEREFORE, in teh first poem, the innocnet kids "innocent"ly believe what the soceity tells them and believe that they will go to heaven. they are very innocent and gullible. in the second poem, the kid realizes that the church is the cause of its sufferings. contrasting chahi tehi ho.
the first poem is about beleiving, having hope and the second is about dissing the church.
good luck! the day u hand in ur AP exam will be the happiest day of the year.
 
Posted on 03-30-06 8:57 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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azwnty
mail me ur email add.
 
Posted on 03-30-06 9:27 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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guys, go in2 the chatroom,why takin up space of lurakani?
 
Posted on 03-30-06 9:32 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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chatroom is sooo distracting k..ani its even worse if i don't know anyone in there k.

azwnty
ou es tu? email me ur add bhanya..
 
Posted on 03-31-06 5:15 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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AznshawtY - hmm...here's what i have to say to you: go fuk yourself! :@ :@ :@


lfc123- thanks! :) :)
 
Posted on 03-31-06 2:17 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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OOOOOOOOOOOO how am i gonna do that, my bf does me! duh, well i dont mind you gifting me the "precious stick".. why are you so mad babygirl? what did i do wrong :O, the poems you picked up are mindblowing babygirl! :)
 
Posted on 03-31-06 2:19 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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of lfc, mon amie im adding you right away, i will beon for a while and i will ahfto go :)
 
Posted on 03-31-06 2:21 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nails,
pourquoi êtes vous fâché a mon amie? quoi elle dit avec vous?
 
Posted on 03-31-06 2:25 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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bien~ nails est mécontent avec moi, i dont care! :)
 
Posted on 03-31-06 2:42 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Ke bhasa ho you? spanish ho?? Malai ni sikau na yar, malai ta uno dos tres quadro sinko bahek kehi aauna yar. help me learn a little bit.
 
Posted on 03-31-06 2:45 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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This is French
 



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